Experienced Entrepreneurs opinion on what is better for seed round 3?
I have been working on hundreds of pitch decks and also put together some draft video business summaries in order to tease interest in a complex project.
I would like to know where to put my resource attention in the next fund raise.
Here is my current version of the intro video draft. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u91GHCUaFPQ What do you think?
You lost me in the first 30 seconds. This project will fail, sorry.
Pitch deck. Video is a vanity project that shows a company is in love with what it has built not the core problem it solves.
Please find someone who can write a script for you. If you want, I can connect you to someone.
Then find someone professional for voice-over on Fiverr. I have used a person name Mark Ryes who has a British Accent. I couldn't find his direct link on Fiverr but with little efforts you will be able to find it.
Find someone who can do professional animation video for you. Again, let me know if you can't find and I can connect with you someone I know.
You need a video which will grab user's attention and keep him till the end.
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